Rethinking My Motives

As I woke to the oddly-smelling, dirty motel room, I reflected on why I was here. It was all because of an argument, and now there was a strange woman with me in a strange place, and I had an odd-looking rash where rashes oughtn’t be; why do these things happen to me?

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4 thoughts on “Rethinking My Motives”

  1. It’s not crap although I think you could lose ‘reflected’. But some might say it is really three sentences ..

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    1. Yes, those semi-colons are in use. I’m letting semi-colons go for now and seeing how the site and content develop. Like with the super-long sentences. If it gets too out of control then I’ll put a character limit in the submission form. That’ll force some brevity!

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