Under The Bed

I was tightly tucked up in bed with the glow of the nightlight illuminating the corner, as I begged my father to check for monsters in the cupboard opposite.

He closed the bedroom door and I switched off the nightlight and pulled myself into the blanket. It was then I heard the heavy breathing. He forgot to look under the bed.

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1 thought on “Under The Bed”

  1. Paul,
    Try writing your story in TWO sentences.
    You have four.

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