I caressed the empty space in our bed, still warm where once you were and supposed that you were gone forever. Soon my pillow was soaked with tears, my body exhausted by wrenching sobs, and then I heard the toilet flush.
First weekly competition winner!
20 thoughts on “Supposing”
Sharon, I laughed when I read this! Do you think some people are really that insecure?
I am so glad that you laughed. I could almost see a cartoonists rendering while I wrote it. And,yes, I was remembering a particularly young lady when I wrote this. She was truly “that” insecure!
I can’t believe that you can write just two sentences and have said so much! I really think it was fantastic!
That was absolutely wonderful. Great!!!
Yo, Sharon….You got it girl….keep doing it….both your entry’s were very good. You guys that are by nature “full of it” can do stuff like this. Hope you win….Love you Girl…U. Ladd
Beautifully written and what sweet surprises
Hahaha, very clever! I love it.
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SHARON THAT WAS A HOOT, THANKS FOR THE LAUGH
What fun – I do know people who always see life’s little moments in high drama.
That was great!! Made me Smile:)
I was ready for a good cry … until the last. Great!
This is something that only you can think of… great punchline!
I CAN’T FIGURE OUT HOW TO VOTE~I TRIED & TRIED! ALL I CAN SAYIS, THERE WILL BE A MOVIE MADE FROM A BOOK PUBLISHED BY YOU AND WE WILL HAVE THE SAME LAST NAME! ANOTHER TALENTED WRITER IN THE FAMILY…YOUR SURROGATE FATHER IS PROUD OF YOU AND IS GERRY…KEEP UP THE TALENT..LOVE YOU…GORDON
Hurro – you should be able to move your mouse pointer over the stars underneath the story and click on the number of stars (points) you wish to give it.
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Congrats on winning the first weekly prize! That’s a really cool story 🙂
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Ha! I really liked this, well done on winning this week 🙂
Congrats on the win!
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Congrats on the win!
Hi Sharon: Congratulations. I hope RT Speaks is helping you with your very creative, imaginative writing.
Congratulations. So funny.