I shouted at her that I wasn’t a robot, that I had feelings and hopes and dreams and so what if I was falling in love!
She pressed a button on a remote, a panel opened in my chest and at least one thing I had just yelled wasn’t true.

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  1. i gave it a nine and used it as an exercise (below)… nice work!

    Tears poured like monsoon rain as I begged her to know that I was not some android, and that I had feelings, hopes, dreams and that she should understand my love for her.

    She softly caressed my neck as, with a click, the back of my head popped open.

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