Shock

Kelly was my girlfriend at the time and she tried to shock me one day by showing me that she had shaved her head. I just laughed because I knew I had a far better shock waiting for her in my backyard where I kept the dead bodies of all the people I had murdered.

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Shock, 6.0 out of 10 based on 53 ratings

2 thoughts on “Shock”

  1. This story, as darkly funny and short as it is, brought up memories of autumn when I was about 12, riding my bike down the street by the O’Connor’s house. I liked the faint hint of cigarette smoke, not oppressive like at my pepere’s house, but playful on the breeze, teasing and comforting.

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    1. Thanks so much for reading the story and commenting on it. I’m glad it triggered some memories for you. John Kujawski

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