The hum of the city just waking up reached my ears and I smiled, letting the wind rustle my hair. It was peaceful; perfect. And then the gunshots began.

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BANG, 6.7 out of 10 based on 56 ratings

2 thoughts on “BANG”

  1. That’s three sentences and also not a complete story, just a beginning. Disqualified.

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  2. Well said, Lillian.
    However, the sit calls for stories told in “two sentences”.
    Yours has three.

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