BANG The hum of the city just waking up reached my ears and I smiled, letting the wind rustle my hair. It was peaceful; perfect. And then the gunshots began. VN:F [1.9.22_1171]please wait...Rating: 6.7/10 (56 votes cast)BANG, 6.7 out of 10 based on 56 ratings Share this:Click to share on Twitter (Opens in new window)Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window)Click to share on Google+ (Opens in new window) Related
That’s three sentences and also not a complete story, just a beginning. Disqualified. VA:F [1.9.22_1171]please wait...Rating: 0.0/5 (0 votes cast) Reply
Well said, Lillian. However, the sit calls for stories told in “two sentences”. Yours has three. VA:F [1.9.22_1171]please wait...Rating: 1.0/5 (1 vote cast) Reply
That’s three sentences and also not a complete story, just a beginning. Disqualified.
Well said, Lillian.
However, the sit calls for stories told in “two sentences”.
Yours has three.