Alone

To his satisfaction, finally the wall was built.
Only in time did he begin to wish he’d added a gate.

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4 thoughts on “Alone”

  1. Exquisite in simplicity yet a more complete story could not be told in two sentences. I would search for more by this writer but no name is provided.

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  2. Thank you, Sharon. I don’t know why my name’s not showing, I did include it? Perhaps it is because I don’t have a word press account? I don’t know. Anyway, Nathan’s right, that’s the only two sentence one I’ve posted. There is some more of my (longer!) writing at http://www.liverpooluk.info/ although the site is a work in progress at the moment…

    I loved yours too, the dashed hopes and the restored faith.. very clever!
    I like the challenge of the two sentences- good fun! x

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