Alone To his satisfaction, finally the wall was built. Only in time did he begin to wish he’d added a gate. VN:F [1.9.22_1171]please wait...Rating: 8.5/10 (4 votes cast)Alone, 8.5 out of 10 based on 4 ratings Share this:Click to share on Twitter (Opens in new window)Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window)Click to share on Google+ (Opens in new window) Related
4 thoughts on “Alone”
A masterpiece of allusion and so poignant. :))
Exquisite in simplicity yet a more complete story could not be told in two sentences. I would search for more by this writer but no name is provided.
Her name is Sarah Monteith – I don’t know if she has anything more up yet!
Nathan Ryder’s last blog post..Two Sentence Story
Thank you, Sharon. I don’t know why my name’s not showing, I did include it? Perhaps it is because I don’t have a word press account? I don’t know. Anyway, Nathan’s right, that’s the only two sentence one I’ve posted. There is some more of my (longer!) writing at http://www.liverpooluk.info/ although the site is a work in progress at the moment…
I loved yours too, the dashed hopes and the restored faith.. very clever!
I like the challenge of the two sentences- good fun! x